Having toruble writting my essay...please help !!!!!?

If you think about what made you pick this particular piece of writing as an example of bad writing, you will have the answers to some of your questions. Was it the fact that it is obviously a non-native translation? The incomplete sentences? The inverted word order? The run-on sentences? The faulty logic? The fact that what is supposed to be a sales pitch is written in such technical (and therefore boring) language? The suspicion that part of the writing is unattributed plagiarism, since the English gets better in some parts than in others? Then give an example of each problem that you find with the writing.